I've been working on the proposed change to the Tennessee Code and a cover letter to go with it.
The proposed change to the code has a few small changes. The main thing is the new cover letter I put together to go with the proposed change to the code. The cover letter is a modification of Dick Bueschel's 7-page letter that he wrote way back when: "It's Time the Laws Were Changed".
Would you guys please look at both items and giver me feedback?
I want to see if the cover letter makes since and gives a clear reason to change the code. It's written specifically for Tennessee.